We had to make a amazing (BTW the reason it is amazing is because I made it) long write out of that but luckily we had a sentence starter here:
It was the dead of night.
All that could be heard was the muffled beating of the creature’s enormous wings as it soared through the inky-black sky. Behind it, at the end of a frayed length of rope, sat the coachman. Coat wrapped tightly around his broad shoulders, his mission tonight was a straightforward one: to escort the two strangers to Castle Midnight. It all seemed straightforward to him. Even if it wasn’t, he always did as the Master bade. No one ever dared to disobey the Master, especially on a night such as this…
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Finally now the moment you have been waiting for... The actual long write:
It was the dead of night.
All that could be heard was the muffled beating of the creature’s enormous wings as it soared through the inky-black sky. Behind it, at the end of a frayed length of rope, sat the coachman. Coat wrapped tightly around his broad shoulders, his mission tonight was a straightforward one: to escort the two strangers to Castle Midnight. It all seemed straightforward to him. Even if it wasn’t, he always did as the Master bade. No one ever dared to disobey the Master, especially on a night such as this… the coachman sat in his seat Bump bump thud “Hurry up why don’t ya?” The couchman whipped the creature as it screeched into the night. The dark sky turned into an even darker cloud. Rain started falling making the coachman drenched, Thunder clapped and lightning hit the ground with a smash. Finally they made it to Castle midnight. The people walked into the castle leaving the couchman behind. “Before you go be careful” The coachman said in a croaky voice. “Oh such a silly man! I think we will be fine. Come Arthur” Taking off their coat. “Sure Mary” There was a man and a woman obviously married wearing very posh clothing. Taking no time going down the corridor. The door shut with a creak and a slam. They walked down to a door, They were supposed to stay there that night. They went into her room taking their stuff. The room was very old, but nice. They set up and went down to the dining area to have tea. When they mad it down they found there food already there, nice and warm. They came back to the room and got ready for bed, The couple got into bed and went to sleep… they woke up with a ear deafening crash. There cupboard fell over. Mary checked here phone the clock face saying 3:26 am. They got out of bed and put there coat on. Grabbing the flashlight they walked into the corridor. They turn on the light showing a silhouette of some sort of creature. Then disappearing into the darkness, they went forward and found a liquid dripping from the ceiling they led somewhere… They followed it.
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