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Friday 11 August 2017

Minecraft: The adventures of steve

Minecraft:
The adventures of steve

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This is steve he goes to school but not any school “The school for building noobs”
Right now steve needs to get ready for school.“Steve you need to get ready for school” said steves mum “but mum not the school for building noobs” said steve “maybe you should be better at building” she said “fine”.when he got to school everyone was looking a something “oh hi alex” said steve “what's happening” everyone was talking  “look for yourself” steve stepped over it looked like a creeper had exploded and there was a sign that read ‘herobrine will rise`steve thought this mustn't be good The rest of the day was pretty normal. When he got home he told his mum about what happened “steve there no such thing as herobrine the tales aren’t true they're made up” but something was telling him that herobrine is real.The rest of the week went back to normal people stopped talking about what happened.when he got home his mum said “steve we’re going on a holiday at the amusement park steve was so excited he went straight to his room to pack the next day he got quickly ate his breakfast and got in the car the ride was really long and boring but it was worth it when they got there he went straight to the best ride there he was running around everywhere until he heard “steve it's time  to go” steve didn’t want to leave but he had to. When he came back to school he went into his

Class mining inside there were creepers everywhere he could do one thing fight. He ran over to the nearest chest found a picaxe and fought the creepers. He hit them and whacked them the rest ran away. “I need to learn to fight” he said to himself he changed the subjects to fight 5 times a week. Once he did it for long enough times his teacher told he is a true master at fighting. He had to find herobrine the next day he set to find herobrine but first he needed to get some armor and weapons he found a cave and started to mine he was lucky because he found a dungeon with three diamonds and 32 iron.He went to a village and crafted iron armor and a diamond sword and went to a library to enchant his sword but he came up to a villager “oh hello can I use your enchanting table to enchant my sword” steve said “meh” the villager said. It also let him have a bow “thanks so much” and he set off it was getting dark and he came up to a patch in the wood he looked round and saw two glowing bright white eye so he new it was herobrine he charged at him with his sword herobrine teleported to behind him and punched him in the back steve got out his bow and shot. Missed him herobrine teleported again and kicked steve “ow! You're not going to get away with it” he said weakly “I already have” herobrine said he started to spin round him really fast steve was on his knees he stuck out his sword and hit herobrine and hit him in the chest. Steve head butted him then kicked him into the air steve got out his bow shot it and hit herobrine in the head he fell to the ground as dead as a corpse the at that moment steve fell to the ground the next day he woke up and saw his mum on the side of his bed steve “I’m glad you're awake” said steves mum “I heard you saved the town from herobrine I’m sorry I didn’t believe you that herobrine was real” she said “it's ok at least the save the over world”...

6 comments:

  1. I like how you put detail in your story. I thought it was funny when Steve went to the school of building noobs. I can’t wait to read the rest of your story.It reminds me of the game minecraft.I am a halfway building noob.I think you don’t need to add any more to the story it is so long it must have toke you a long time to make your story. Could you add more?

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  2. I really liked the pitcher and the story.
    THis story reminded me of me playing minecraft .
    Maybe next time you could make steve not go to a school for building noobs ?
    What did steve's mum look like ?

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    1. That's a good question I will work on it:)
      Thanks Aliyah for the comment

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  3. hi kade its me corbin I like your story I also like minecraft

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  4. This is very good

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