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Friday 13 September 2019

Kade's blog post analysis

Hello,
Since I have been blogging for 3 YEARS, Ok, I know not that long. But still, SOOOO I decided to make a Blog Post Analysis.
I have made a google drawing.
I hope you like my blog post
If you did could you please comment.
Kind regards
Kade
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1 comment:

  1. Amelia24 October 2019 at 22:20

    Kia Ora Kade, My name is Amelia and I am a Year 8 student currently attending Pt England School.

    I have been previously commenting on children's blogs from Yaldhurst, and your blog posts are very interesting! I really liked the way you informed the people about what you are going to be doing, it sounded like a personal welcome from you which was very cool!

    It's good to hear that you have been blogging for 3 years :) I think that you have been contributing a lot of eye catching blog posts. I've been blogging ever since Year 3 and I have accomplished 573 blog-posts. Do you have a goal on a number of blog posts you want to hit?!

    Next time, think about the words you are using. Is it suitable or helpful for the topic of your blog post. Instead of using multiple words over and over again, try finding other ways of saying it - this will definitely create a more strong way to explain your blog post. I also wanted to see a bit more of an explanation about your blog analysis. Was it hard blogging? Did you reach a goal you previous had? Do you think you have improved in blogging these three years?

    Keep making awesome blog-posts Kade!
    -Amelia

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