Recount AGAIN🤔

Hey Sisters!🤔

It'ss me Kadddeeee!
I made a recount AGAIN If you'd like to see it comment if you don't GO AWAY!!!!

But anyway all you guys (and girls) know wonder? Well its a book (and movie) its about this kid who was born with a disorder for his face and now he has to deal with school and stuff. Here's a pic of the cover.  I made a recount about when he goes to the tour of his school. Wanna see it? Of course you do. 

Here it is:

Last week I did something a bit out of the ordinary, my Mum took me over to Beecher Prep also known as my new school. When we got there I walked in like a turtle, I was not happy. We were then greeted by the friendly Mr Tushman (I thought it was a bit funny.) He could obviously see that I was smiling and said that some other kids thought it was funny. We talked about what it would be like at this school. Then Mr T said something really interesting, he said that there were some other kids from the same homeroom as me. Mr T told them to take me on a tour I was scared at first but I got a bit ticked off. I looked at Mum to show her how annoyed I was but when I saw her she was more nervous than me.

Mr T showed me to the kids they were called Julian, Jack and Charlotte. After that we left, first we headed to our homeroom which was room 301. Charlotte explains that this is where you go before school it's where you get the roll done. Once they were done with that room they moved on to the science lab.

Julian opened the door but out of nowhere stood in front of it. Jack told him to let me in and nudged him out of the way. Julian started explaining everything to me like I the most stupid person on the planet. He pointed to a rubber and told me what it is, Jack afterwards butted in and said that I know what a rubber is. Within moments Julian asked me if I knew what a rubber was obviously I said yes. Eventually we left the room to go to the auditorium.

I looked around the large room Charlotte told me that last year they did a school play. Julian next said that I probably didnt wanna be in a play. I then thought to myself that he didn't need to answer for me. Out of nowhere Charlotte said I didn't need to be in the actual play. I could do the lighting or something. After that Julian asked what's the deal with my face had I been in a fire of something. Charlotte told him off for being amazingly rude and said that he was born like that. She also said that if he'd been listening he would've known. Out of nowhere Jack said that Julian should just shut up afterwards Julian to Jack to shut up. Mometerialy like a firework an argument sparked up. After a while we leave, at the doorway Jack tells me that Julian is a Jerk but I needed to talk.

We finally make it back to the office and Mum is talking to Mr T. He said that we can keep going but I give Mum the signal that I wanted to leave. Mum afterwards said that they needed to go to pick up Via which was a lie. We got into the car and Mum asked me how it was I didn't answer I just wanted to go home. When I was driving back home I was hoping that I won't mess with Julian that much.

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As you can see it needs improvement. So it would be really helpful if you could tell me what I need to improve on, It would be a great help. Well anyways I will see you next time

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